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NaruHina: All My Heart

Today was the day, and Hinata was so excited. Today was her fifth anniversary with her boyfriend, Naruto, whom she had been living with for two years now. She still remembered how she'd met him, almost down to the last detail.

That had been a bad day. She had just been fired from her part time job at her favorite music store. She loved that job. She could play the instruments as she wanted and sing whenever she wanted. She loved when customers would come in and play on the instruments and she could buy any CD she wanted for half the price. She adored how the customers' faces would light up when they found just the right guitar, or keyboards, or drums, or anything, even something as small as a harmonica. Her hours were perfect so they didn't conflict with college schedule. The was pay was pretty good too.

On her way home, her old used car had broken down, and the man who towed her car refused to give her a ride.

"That's not my job," he'd said. "Call a taxi."

He drove off, leaving her stranded. She would've called a taxi had her phone not been stolen earlier that day.

Hinata had sighed as she trudged toward her small apartment. On her way, she couldn't help but be drawn to the sound of an acoustic guitar and a melodious male voice. Without even thinking, she followed the sound. There, standing on the street corner, was, she had to admit, an attractive, but not the most attractive, guy playing the guitar. His blonde spiky hair was a mess, his clothes were rumpled and dirty.

She couldn't help but be attracted to him. While she knew she'd seen more attractive men before, she liked how he looked. She liked the warm and fun vibe that emanated from him. She loved how his blue eyes had sparkled in the sunlight as he sang. She loved his smile and peculiar, what seemed to be, whisker marks on his cheeks. What she found herself most drawn to, however, was his voice. It was compelling to listen to, so full of emotions and he rarely made any mistakes. He hit every note perfectly. She had found out later that he had perfect pitch, much to her envy.

Hinata stopped and listened to this boy. He noticed her as she approached, and smiled at her as his eyes locked with hers. He continued singing, but now it seemed as though he was singing to her, for her. She blushed, but couldn't bring herself to look away. When he finished, she placed money in his guitar case and turned to leave, reluctantly. He stopped her.

"Hey," he'd called out to her. "Where do you think you're going?" She turned to face him, a little shocked by how he'd addressed her. He grinned in response. "You haven't told me your name. Or your phone number. Or when I should pick you up for dinner."

Hinata blushed again as she told him.

"All right Hinata, I'll see you at eight." Naruto, she'd learned his name now, had said.

Hinata smiled at the memory. She was a little frustrated, though. She remembered all of those details, she remembered Naruto's orange T-shirt and black jeans, her black skirt and lavender V-neck, she remembered that the weather was perfect, she remembered the exact street corner where they had been, she remembered almost everything. The one thing she couldn't remember was the song he sang.

Hinata huffed as she stepped out of the shower, a little frustrated. She decided to put the thought out of her head and focused on getting ready. She was supposed to meet Naruto at the restaurant in an hour, and she didn't want to be late. She dressed in a navy blue dress and black heels. Her makeup was light and simple. Her hair was straight and down as she always wore it.

Hinata arrived at the restaurant and saw Naruto waiting for her in a booth in the corner. He waved her over.

"Hey there, beautiful," Naruto said as she sat down across from him.

"Hey to you too. I can't believe we're eating here, isn't this place really expensive?" Hinata asked. Naruto shrugged.

"Don't worry about it."

Hinata and Naruto continued talking as they ordered their food and eventually as they ate. Hinata found herself thinking of when she first met Naruto again, and the fact that she'd forgotten the song he sang tugged at her mind. She couldn't take it anymore; she had to ask him.

"Naruto, I know this is a little off-hand, but you know the day we met?" Hinata asked. Naruto nodded. "I feel terrible that I can't remember this, but what song were you playing on the street corner?"

Naruto grinned. He looked at a waiter and waved him over. Hinata looked at Naruto confused as the waiter walked over.

"Can you bring it now?" Naruto asked the waiter. He grinned and nodded as he walked away.

"What is he bringing?" Hinata asked.

"You'll see," Naruto said as he winked at her.

The waiter approached them once more, carrying a black acoustic guitar case in his hand. Naruto's acoustic guitar case, may she point out. Realization struck Hinata as her eyes widened and she looked at Naruto. The waiter gave Naruto his case and backed up, but didn't leave. Naruto got out of the booth and placed the case on the floor and Hinata watched him. She continued to watch as Naruto took his beautiful acoustic out of the case and slung the strap over his shoulder lazily, but carefully and stood up.

"You said you couldn't remember what I played on that street corner five years ago?" Naruto asked. Hinata nodded in confirmation, still eying him curiously. Naruto smiled. "I played this."

Naruto began strumming and Hinata recognized the song instantly. She'd been so stupid to forget he played this! Naruto opened his mouth and began to sing, just as he had five years ago. As he sang, the same expression danced across his features as it had five years ago, but his gaze was slightly different. There was so much love behind his eyes as he looked at Hinata that she found herself blushing as she had five years ago.

"There's so many things that I could say
But I'm sure it would come out all wrong
You got something that I can't explain,
Still try and try and let you know

"That first summer we spent's one we'll never forget,
Looking for any kind of reason to escape all the mess that
We thought was what made us
Ain't it funny now? We can see
We're who we're meant to be

"You still have all of my
You still have all of my
You still have all my heart

"Ooh ooh ooh ooh
Ooh ooh ooh oooh
Ooh ooh ooh ooh
Ooh ooh ooh oooh...

"There's too many times I have to say
I could have been better and stronger for you and me
You always make me feel okay
Those late summers we spent, stay up talking all night
I'd ask "you think we'd ever make it?"
You'd say "I'm sure if it's right"
Ain't it funny to think just how stupid I used to be
Hope you always believe

"You still have all of my
You still have all of my
You still have all my heart

"You still have all of my
You still have all of my
You still have all my heart

"Let them talk and talk and talk
Let them say what they want
We will laugh at the thought they don't know what we've got
Every year that goes by, a year older we are
You'll still be beautiful then, bless your beautiful heart

"They'll talk and talk and talk
How crazy is it?
Someone could waste their whole life, helplessly,
Just patiently waiting for a love like you and me

"You still have all of my
You still have all of my
You still have all my heart

"You still have all of my heart
You still have all of my (you still have all of my heart)
You still have all of my (you still have all of my heart)
You still have all of my heart (you still have all of my heart)

"You still have all of my(I've been waiting my whole life)
You still have all of my
(For someone to save me still can't believe that you're mine)
You still have all of my heart...."

The song ended and Hinata was frozen in place, a smile graced her lovely face. Naruto placed his guitar carefully back in its case as the people around them applauded. Hinata expected Naruto to sit back down, but he didn't. As if she wasn't surprised enough as it was.

Hinata's eyes widened as Naruto knelt on one knee, and he removed a small velvety black box from his pocket.

"Hinata Hyuuga," Naruto started. "Five years ago, I met you. It seemed like you'd had a rough day when by chance you stumbled across me. I never thought I could be so lucky as to meet someone as sweet, loving, and beautiful inside and out as you. You sing like an angel, and I absolutely love it when you sing to me. You are the sweetest girl I've ever met, and I love every moment I get to spend with you almost as much as I love you. And after these five long years, you still have all of my heart. I can't imagine spending a day without you. Hinata Hyuuga, will you marry me?"

Hinata's eyes filled with tears as she stood up. Her smile, if possible, grew wider as she knelt down in front of him. She was so overjoyed and chocked up she couldn't utter a single word. So she nodded and kissed him. She pulled away and took a deep breath.

"Yes!" She exclaimed.
So this is for :iconvrockz: contest. I admit, I really like this story, and I hope you all do too! I don't own Naruto or this song. The song, by the way, is All My Heart by Sleeping with Sirens. Link to acoustic version: www.youtube.com/watch?v=hzfHnr…
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QueenBlaze101 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Student General Artist
OMK!!! Sooooo good! 
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utaokureru Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you like it and thanks for faving it! :D
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QueenBlaze101 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Student General Artist
No problem! 
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utaokureru Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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ChewieCookies Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That was AWESOME! Great job!
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utaokureru Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Glad yyou like it! :D
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ChewieCookies Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I certainly do!
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utaokureru Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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animemangart Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Excellent!! Clap 
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utaokureru Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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